Here is my end of the Term l writing sample. Find out why I gave myself 24 points.

In swimming I have been successful in developing my freestyle stroke.

I have been learning to use a new app - Screencastify, to share my learning.

I have been learning to use adjectives, add my thoughts and feelings and to put talking into my writing to make it more interesting for my readers.

Here is a strategy I have learnt to use to solve addition problems to 20.

I read the text 'One wheel" and used some important ideas about Christian Huriwai for my presentation.

In my Rippa Rugby story I tried to use more language features like similes, interesting words, time words and thoughts and feelings.