I liked your writing about Rippa Rugby. I really liked how you used a simile to describe how fast you were going too. Your story had some great time words and I could follow it from the beginning to the end because of how you wrote all the things you did in order. Great job!
I liked your writing about Rippa Rugby. I really liked how you used a simile to describe how fast you were going too. Your story had some great time words and I could follow it from the beginning to the end because of how you wrote all the things you did in order. Great job!
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