Hi Kohl-lee, I Like how you added photos and you presented your work nicely wow what a great score. When you come home I can teach you more to become a master at writing keep the good blogging up
Hi Kohl-lee, I Like how you added photos and you presented your work nicely wow what a great score. When you come home I can teach you more to become a master at writing keep the good blogging up
Hey Kohl-lee. Great first draft. I can't wait to see your finished piece of writing. Remember to check that all proper nouns have capital letters e.g. Lindvart Park. Thanks Kohl-lee keep up the great work.
Hi Miss Simeon Thank you for your nice comments. Your comments were really helpful. I'm still trying to put in fullstops and capital letters correctly. Blog you later.
Woow Kohl-lee you have an awsome story about representing tautoro school for rippa rugby. You got a good score in your writing keep it up Kohl-lee.
ReplyDeleteWoow Kohl-lee you have an awsome story about representing tautoro school for rippa rugby. You got a good score in your writing keep it up Kohl-lee.
ReplyDeleteHi Kohl-lee,
ReplyDeleteI Like how you added photos and you presented your work nicely wow what a great score. When you come home I can teach you more to become a master at writing keep the good blogging up
Hi Kohl-lee,
ReplyDeleteI Like how you added photos and you presented your work nicely wow what a great score. When you come home I can teach you more to become a master at writing keep the good blogging up
Hey Kohl-lee. Great first draft. I can't wait to see your finished piece of writing. Remember to check that all proper nouns have capital letters e.g. Lindvart Park. Thanks Kohl-lee keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Simeon
DeleteThank you for your nice comments. Your comments were really helpful. I'm still trying to put in fullstops and capital letters correctly. Blog you later.