Hi Kohl-lee, wowee! what an awesome recount of the cross country. I loved how you expressed how you were feeling and the choice of words you used in your writing like ginormous hill, prickly poky thorns and gorse. Well done to you and Mum. I hope you two didn't fall in the slippery, slimy, yucky mud puddle hehe. Mihi nui ki a koe
Hi Whaea Pam. Thank you for your amazing comments. I really enjoyed your comments. We had to walk in the slippery,slimy,yucky mud puddle. We miss you in our classroom. Blog your later Whaea Pam.
Hi Kohl-lee, wowee! what an awesome recount of the cross country. I loved how you expressed how you were feeling and the choice of words you used in your writing like ginormous hill, prickly poky thorns and gorse. Well done to you and Mum. I hope you two didn't fall in the slippery, slimy, yucky mud puddle hehe. Mihi nui ki a koe
ReplyDeleteHi Whaea Pam. Thank you for your amazing comments. I really enjoyed your comments. We had to walk in the slippery,slimy,yucky mud puddle. We miss you in our classroom. Blog your later Whaea Pam.
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