Science rules!

Drink Water or else!

Here is my writing.

The easy thing was thinking of the ideas

The hard thing was making examples to go with my writing

WALT use : and ; correctly

Drink water or else!

Introduction

WALT use : and ; correctly

Drink water or else!

Introduction

At Tautoro School we are doing the Water Challenge. The challenge is to switch our sugary drinks to water for 30 days! You may think that's ten centuries. Well it's not even, it's just 30 days! Unless you're too scared to do the 30 day challenge. Why would anyone want to drink water for 30 days? Well, I am going to explain why sugary drinks are harmful to our health.But you will think that water is Dumb to drink and sugary drinks are the best. That's why i’m here to tell you some facts why sugar’s are very dangerous.

Dangers in acids

One reason why sugary & diet drinks are so dangerous because there are acids in your drinks. The matufactures are not telling you that there are hidden acids in  types of drinks. If you drink a drink that has heaps of acid in it it will effect inside of your body. In fact we did a class experiment. We put eggs into a container of sugary drinks and left them there for a few days. To see what was going to happen. Also a egg was rotting so bad it look liked the shell skin was burning off

You can gain weight if you drink sugary drinks

You might think that sugary drinks are delicious and you would drink them all the time. Well if you like sugary drinks then you like to gain weight. For example do you like drinking mountain dew or sprite. Well it has heaps of calories and no if you have too much calories you can gain weight. Even energy drinks make you gain weight. What if you are working out and you drink energy drinks and you waste your time. Did you know if you drink water it doesn’t make you gain weight because it has no calories in it.Did you know if you drink a can of fizzy every day all year you will gain 6.5kgs.Being obese puts you at greater risk of : heart disease,kidney disease,type 2 diabetes, stroke and some cancers.

Health problems

Another reason why sugary drinks can cause health problems . Like heart cancer, cancer,diabetes and much more. Do you want to die at a young age? Also children are dying at a young age because they’re drinking way too much fizzy drinks. Do you want this to happen to you? Your brain wants you to have a healthy and amazing body. So that means you have to drink healthy thinks even if you don’t want too.

Conclusion

In conclusion, we are switching to water because fizzy drinks has heaps of acid in it.  also it can make you gain weight and fizzy drinks can cause health problems. So switch to water and be a better person.

The professional's at cleaning.

WALT create advertisements

This video was created with we-video and I created this advert.

I was successful because I had big words,Provide necessary detail also I was keeping to my color theme.

I need to work on is having instrumental music

The hard thing was nothing
The easy thing was making this video and cleaning the cars.

This advert is about our market day what we are doing.
We are going to clean inside of cars.

Hope my team mates see you there on December the 1st 4.00-6.00

Science Rules!

In class I am doing an experiment.

Are sugary & diet drinks harmful?

My Hypothesis is I think that the egg shell is going to change color.

I observed that if you drink red bull then it will dissolve your inside.
Red bull zero is the most acidic drink we tested.

Here are some photos

Who Loves Numbers!!!

We are learning to know the different ways we represent numbers

Our task was to come up with numbers our numbers had to go up to the millions

What I found hard was naming those big numbers.I found millions hard to read too.

What I found easy was recording it.

My next step is to name even harder numbers.

There might be mistakes but comment down below.

Here is our video
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Don't Be a Lazy Couch Potato.

This is my writing assessment. I have tried to independently improve my sentences I am looking to check that they make sense. I am checking my punctuation. 

I am still learning about complex sentences.

I think I'm good at knowing Simple and compound. 

Don't Be a Lazy Couch Potato.

You may think that music is better than sports well I’m here to tell you sports is much more important than music. Agree or disagree? Isn’t this what everyone wants?

Firstly I think that sports is more important than music because you can make new friends in sports. Do you make friends in music? I didn’t think so. When you make friends in sports they help you do sports they’re like your whanau( Family). For example, What if you were a shameful loner and you didn’t even have friends even your brother or sister didn’t even talk to you. When you played sports for the first time and you were popular at it you would have friends and your brother or sister liked you and they wanted to be your friend. For example, What if you went to the Olympics and you meet new people and they wanted to be your friends.  What if you had heaps of friends. Wouldn’t you like that? I know I would.

In other words sports is more important than music because you get fit and healthy and you get tons of energy. For example, Whenever I run I make tons of energy and if you run everyday then you would get tons of energy too. If you aren’t fit and healthy well here’s your chance to make that happen. You can be dieing because of obese, cancer, heart attack there are more things you can die from for not playing sports.  I think it’s tragic seeing people dying at a young age or at a old age because they never ever played sports in there life. Added to this, what if you were dieing and you family showed you sports and Boom you were as fit as you brother and sister.

Finally I think sports is way more important than music because you won’t be addicted to technology. I think it's appalling that some people don’t even know how to play sports. Don’t you think that too? Get of you lazy butt’s people and do something in your life go outside, get fresh air, play some sports. Get of that couch or bed of yours and do something make a change in your life. Unless you want to be a lazy as couch potato that was dieing because from cancer because you didn’t know how to play sports. For example, what if technology wasn’t invented  what would you do in your spare time  would you be playing sports.

In summary as I said this in the beginning  I think that sports is more important than music is you can make new friends and also meet new friends, You can be fit and healthy  also you won’t be addicted to technology.