Drink Water or else!

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Drink water or else!

Introduction

WALT use : and ; correctly

Drink water or else!

Introduction

At Tautoro School we are doing the Water Challenge. The challenge is to switch our sugary drinks to water for 30 days! You may think that's ten centuries. Well it's not even, it's just 30 days! Unless you're too scared to do the 30 day challenge. Why would anyone want to drink water for 30 days? Well, I am going to explain why sugary drinks are harmful to our health.But you will think that water is Dumb to drink and sugary drinks are the best. That's why i’m here to tell you some facts why sugar’s are very dangerous.

Dangers in acids

One reason why sugary & diet drinks are so dangerous because there are acids in your drinks. The matufactures are not telling you that there are hidden acids in  types of drinks. If you drink a drink that has heaps of acid in it it will effect inside of your body. In fact we did a class experiment. We put eggs into a container of sugary drinks and left them there for a few days. To see what was going to happen. Also a egg was rotting so bad it look liked the shell skin was burning off

You can gain weight if you drink sugary drinks

You might think that sugary drinks are delicious and you would drink them all the time. Well if you like sugary drinks then you like to gain weight. For example do you like drinking mountain dew or sprite. Well it has heaps of calories and no if you have too much calories you can gain weight. Even energy drinks make you gain weight. What if you are working out and you drink energy drinks and you waste your time. Did you know if you drink water it doesn’t make you gain weight because it has no calories in it.Did you know if you drink a can of fizzy every day all year you will gain 6.5kgs.Being obese puts you at greater risk of : heart disease,kidney disease,type 2 diabetes, stroke and some cancers.

Health problems

Another reason why sugary drinks can cause health problems . Like heart cancer, cancer,diabetes and much more. Do you want to die at a young age? Also children are dying at a young age because they’re drinking way too much fizzy drinks. Do you want this to happen to you? Your brain wants you to have a healthy and amazing body. So that means you have to drink healthy thinks even if you don’t want too.

Conclusion

In conclusion, we are switching to water because fizzy drinks has heaps of acid in it.  also it can make you gain weight and fizzy drinks can cause health problems. So switch to water and be a better person.