Sunday, March 6, 2016

In my Rippa Rugby story I tried to use more language features like similes, interesting words, time words and thoughts and feelings.

1 comment:

  1. I liked your writing about Rippa Rugby. I really liked how you used a simile to describe how fast you were going too. Your story had some great time words and I could follow it from the beginning to the end because of how you wrote all the things you did in order. Great job!