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Tuesday, July 12, 2016

This is my Term 2 unedited writing sample.

Next term I will be working on using punctuation correctly-fullstops, capital letters and speech marks.



6 comments:

  1. Woow Kohl-lee you have an awsome story about representing tautoro school for rippa rugby. You got a good score in your writing keep it up Kohl-lee.

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  2. Woow Kohl-lee you have an awsome story about representing tautoro school for rippa rugby. You got a good score in your writing keep it up Kohl-lee.

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  3. Hi Kohl-lee,
    I Like how you added photos and you presented your work nicely wow what a great score. When you come home I can teach you more to become a master at writing keep the good blogging up

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  4. Hi Kohl-lee,
    I Like how you added photos and you presented your work nicely wow what a great score. When you come home I can teach you more to become a master at writing keep the good blogging up

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  5. Hey Kohl-lee. Great first draft. I can't wait to see your finished piece of writing. Remember to check that all proper nouns have capital letters e.g. Lindvart Park. Thanks Kohl-lee keep up the great work.

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    1. Hi Miss Simeon
      Thank you for your nice comments. Your comments were really helpful. I'm still trying to put in fullstops and capital letters correctly. Blog you later.

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