Tuesday, July 4, 2017

Factory fears

 WALT understand cause and effect and use the language of cause and effect in our writing.

learning cause and effects and using the language is going to be fun for you.

I thought what was easy was getting sentence
I thought what was hard was using cause and effects sentences. 

My next step is to be independent at cause and effect.

Topic: People are getting sick because the workers spray (Hazardous things in them)  

The production of electronics is a worldwide problem. When Workers that are creating electronics they spray hazardous or toxic things in the technology. For example, people are dieing because they’re spraying things on electronics. Also workers put flame retardant,mercury ,PVC and solvents in the technology. As a consequence the workers are ruining lives.  

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I think I was successful because I can see my cause and effect sentence. Then I checked that my full stops are in the right place.

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