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Friday, March 2, 2018

Kindness

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What is Kindness?


Everyone in the universe can show kindness to other people.  
Kindness can change people’s life.


Kindness is a type of behavior such as being nice and showing
respect to others. You can show kindness by being friendly using
manaakitanga. For example, if a person is new to a school you can
introduce yourself, show them around the school, and help him or
her meet others.  
As a result, that new person will no longer be lonely.  


Kindness works like this….. If someone let’s other people
join in their game that is showing kindness.
That is being a kind person.
That is also showing manaakitanga (respect),
aroha (love), whanaungatanga (building relationships).
Kind people have good manners and they will
always show these important values.

In conclusion, kindness is about making others feel happy
and delighted.  It makes them feel safe and welcomed.
Kindness is a nice kind of behavior that everyone in the whole
universe can do because everyone has the
ability to do things like that.



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