Business's are attacking!!

WALT know what idioms are and to discuss examples.

Hello we are learning about business so my group and I diced to do a play.

I thought that it was easy to act.

I thought it was hard to remember my lines.

Here is the play. I hope you enjoy.

Rounding machines

   WALT round numbers to the nearest 10 , 100, 1000, whole number and tenth.

The easiest thing was thinking of the numbers to put in. 

The hardest thing was to come up with the answers for a whole and a tenth.

If their any mistakes comment down below and leave positive comments.

Strategies are attacking!!

WALT: communicate how we solve problems.

What I thought what was easy was solving the first problem

What I thought what was hard was solving those other problems.

If I have a mistake please comment down below and remember leave positive comments.

I hate phone factories

In class I had to write a recount from the perspective (view) of a child working in a sweatshop. I chose to be a kid working in a electronic factory.

What was I learning in writing? WALT use descriptive words and phrases to enhance the mood of fear or sadness.

I think I was successful because in my work I can see that I used descriptive language. I had fear and sadness.

What I thought was hard was trying to use the best type of language.

What I thought was easy was writing what was it about.

We are also trying to proof-read for accuracy of complex punctuation.

The phone factory.

On one foggy and chilly  Monday morning I couldn’t see the light. I don’t want go to the phone factory in  Bangladesh . Hi my name is Zingy and my friend name is Eva-la we work in a phone factory. I felt so exhausted my legs were groping to the ground my eyes shut as fast as a dog running. I work for seven days a week .

I had to wake up at 1:00 am I was as tried as a sloth.  I had to go through a sticky swamp I saw dead fish and animal bones.It smelt so bad. I had to walk through a cave with bats and spider ; felt spooky my legs wanted to go faster. Fear crept all over me. My body was shaking. Water dripped on me. Then I climbed up this steep hill. I wanted to faint  because it was too high up. My body felt like one million feet high.  Then I reached the factory . You’re five minutes late!  my boss yelled. I started to quiver . I saw Eva-la she was banging metal. Eva-la Fainted everyone said.  What has happened!  The boss screamed. Eva-la has fainted. The boss went over to her and yelled “ Wake up!” Eva-la woke up. Start working! Will anything good ever happen to me.

Five Hours later the buzzer goes off. Errrrrrrrr!  It is time for lunch. Ew! I thought in my head look at the gooey mashed potatoes yuck! My mouth felt like it was about to throw up. It looked like mud. I think I have to make a complain. When I was right by mister Benson the fourth I thought that maybe he might make me do extra work. The buzzer goes off again. Back to work!   My boss shouted, I gobbled the mashed potatoes.  I wish I could disappear I thought. I made on phone. I got payed forty four cents

Finally, it is 11:50 am . I can finish work and go to sleep . While I was going to sleep I dreamed that I was in my pool swimming in trillions  notes. Mister Benson the fourth could do all my work. Then I thought  I  was too exhausted to work any more.

Rounding monsters.

We are learning to round to the nearest 10,100,1000,tenth and whole.

The hardest things in rounding are rounding to the nearest whole and tenth.

Find the place

look right next store 

5 or more you raise the score.

4 or less let it rests

Look to the right put zeros in sight. 

Pictographs are attacking.

It is important that I look at the key because you can understand the pictograph properly and if you miss the key you would get your work wrong.

Last week I was learning about how important it is to read instructions properly and to look at the key in graphs.

                  Money Made at the Garage Sale

Monday
Tuesday
Wednesday
Thursday
Friday

Key: =  $ 6

How much money was made on Tuesday?  27

How much more money was made on Wednesday? 6

How much more money was made on Monday than Thursday? 12 more dollars .

I love birthdays don't you

WALT improve our writing by carefully checking our sentences and trying to add descriptive language.  I need to keep learning about descriptive language.

“Your turning five already!” I screamed, My whole family went to my cousin Daley's birthday. It was on a Thursday night at my aunt Erana’s House.

When I walked into the house I was just shocked my eyes lit up they had sparkles in them. I was amazed because I saw some paw patrol decorations.I felt like dancing in the sky. I couldn’t believe that I was standing in a Paw Patrol themed party. My brain went to amazing land. Everyone was here at Daley’s birthday party. I nibbled on some chocolate when no one was looking.

A few minutes traveled past and Everyone was lining up. I was the first one to line up. We were lining up so we can eat some divine food. Maybe it came from heaven.  “delicious” as my stomach Grumbled . I grabbed hot dogs,chips,sprite,I ate eight butter chicken pizza. My stomach looked volcano like it was about to erupt. Have you ever felt that way. A few bites later we were having a dance party. I was jumping up and down then spinning all around. I was the best person dancing , as I thought to myself, I was the only one dancing. Do you like dancing in front of people  Suddenly I turned around and bled while everyone was watching. My cousin yelled” Go Kohl-lee.”

A few seconds later “Cake time” my aunt shouted. I was so excited the cake looked so marvelous I wanted to shove it in my face. We sang “ happy birthday to you happy birthday to you.” Daley blew his candles out and his dad sliced the cake. “Look it is a rainbow cake” my cousin Dalton  screamed. I was the first one to eat the cake. “I love you” my stomach said to the cake. That is outstanding when I took a bite my eyes looked like love hearts and I thought I was flying. The cake was gone in a minute. I felt so full, I wanted to hurl.My mouth looked green. A few big bites later I went to go dance. Then we went home we waved and said “goodbye” Then I fell asleep.

I will never forget how delicious that cake was.The best part was eating the cake. I thought it was a cool as day. I felt like I ate too much candy. (The end)